英语整改造句怎么说

To revise and improve a sentence in English, you can say "I need to revise this sentence to make it more clear and accurate." or "I'm going to revise this sentence to make it more concise." Alternatively, you could say "I'm going to rewrite this sentence to make it more effective" or "I want to polish this sentence to make it more polished and professional." It all depends on what specific changes you want to make to the sentence.