短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.

短文改错
     假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文
中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从十一处起）不计分。

     When I first learned to write in English, I ran into much difficulties. The main problem was in that I
always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep
my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy
talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little story
and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much and reads it to the class. All said the story was a good
one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.
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试题答案

      When I first learned to write in English, I ran into much difficulties. The main problem
                                                                             1. many
was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My
  2. 去掉                                                                          3. eveything
teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100 words
                                        4. a                                                 5. 去掉
or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me
                                                      6.  talking                                                            7. myself
in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed ∧to my teacher. She liked it very
                                                                                         8. it
much and reads it to the class. All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great 
           9.  read                                                                               10. words
encouragement to me.