短文改错 My hometown is a pretty city, so people there are (1) kind and polite. With
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My hometown is a pretty city, so people there are
(1) _________
kind and polite. With coming of spring, grass and
(2) _________
trees turn green, and flowers grew in many colors.
(3) _________
In summer, the sea under the blue skies is even more
(4) _________
beautiful. After autumn arrives, the city looks as an
(5) _________
old man with leaves fallen from the trees. In winter,
(6) _________
a lot of white birds come to my city for food. I can
(7) _________
wait more patiently above the sea for quite a long
(8) _________
time. While they find fish come to the surface,
(9) _________
they fly down immediate and catch them without
(10) __________
delay. That is my city, and I love it so much.
试题答案
答案：略
解析：(1)so改为and My hometown is a pretty city与people there are kind and polite是并列关系，不是因果关系。 (2)coming前加the 春天的到来，应为特指。 (3)grew改为grow 整篇文章用了现在时态，因此grow也应用现在时态。 (4)skies改为sky sky为独一无二的东西。 (5)as改为like look like为固定短语，“看起来像”。 (6)fallen改为falling 此处为with复合结构，leave与fall之间是主谓关系，因此fall应用现在分词。 (7)I改为They 主语要一致，上文指的white birds，因此此处应用they代替white birds。 (8)去掉more 本句句意无比较的含义，因此应去掉more。 (9)While改为When while表示段时间，而此处的find为瞬间动词，因此此处应用when，when既可表段时间，也可表点时间。 (10)immediate改为immediately fly为动词，应用副词修饰。 |