My car just wouldn’t move any further .It was complete 1. dead, and I was a few

My car just wouldn’t move any further .Itwas complete             1._______

dead, and I was a few miles far away from anywhereon a cold,   2.______

wet night .I decided walk around a littlebefore accepting I’d         3.______

have to spend the night in the car .Maybe Ican find a              4._______

telephone .Actually ,I didn’t have to walkfar before I            5._______

found a small house standing on a field witha light                6._______

shone from the sitting room .I knocked atthe door and              7._______

was delighting when a pleasant old manopened the               8._______

door but listened to my story carefully .Hesaid he had             9._______

no telephone, and it wasn’t one withinwalking distance,           10._______

but offered to come and look at mycar. 

试题答案

【答案】

1.complete 改成completely

【详解】考查形容词和副词的区别，这里应该用副词修饰形容词dead

2.去掉　far

【详解】表达离什么地方有多远，有了a few files 就不再用far

3.walk前面加to

【详解】decide　后接动词不定式

4.can变成could

【详解】从整篇文章看时态是过去时，故用could

5.正确

6.on变成in

【详解】field前应和介词in

7.shone变成shining

【详解】考查现在分词和过去分词的区别，shine 和a light 构成主动关系，故用现在分词。

8.delighting变成 delighted

【详解】考查现在分词和过去分词的区别，这里应该是高兴，不是让人高兴，故用过去分词。

9.but变成 and

【详解】前后应该是并列而不是转折。

10.it变成 there

【详解】it指代不明，这儿应是there be 结构。

【备考建议】文章内容不是很复杂，是一100词左右的学生习作。错误的设置仍然是常在学生平时写作中常的错误，如：形容词和副词的混用、动词不定式的错用、现在分词和过去分词的混用、常用介词的错用、时态、连词、代词等。考生在备考中应该注意对这些问题的掌握，在写作时经常地注意这些常出现的错误。