假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改. 增加:在缺

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Ù），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及修改均限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。       

When I first learned to write in English, I run intomany difficulty. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese andtried to translate everything into Chinese. My teacher advised me to keepdiaries. I followed her advices. Happily it worked. Soon I began to enjoy talkto myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day Iwrote a short story showed it to my teacher. She liked it very much that sheread it to the class. Everyone said the story was the good one. I was greatencouraged by their words.

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【答案】

 run改为ran       

 difficuity改为difficulties

 去掉in

 advices改为advice

 talk改为talking

 me改为myself

 showed前面加and

 very改为so

 the改为a

 great改为greatly

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