短文改错 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误. 对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误.在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√),如有错误.则按下列情况改正: 该行多一个词:把多

Many teachers worry about the effects of television on young people.

According to studies. any children spend more time

（1）______

watching television than they spend in school. Because so

（2）______

much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of

（3）______

read and the ability to enjoy themselves．No one worries

（4）______

much about the radio program young people listen to，

（5）______

although radios can be very noise．Teachers also wonder about

（6）______

the effects of television commercials．On one year the

（7）______

average child will see 25, 000 television commercials，all

（8）______

planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want

（9）______

things that they don't real need．

（10）______

(1) any→many／some

any是不定代词，表示一定数量“一些”，修饰和代替可数名词复数或不可数名词，既可指人，又可指物.但一般用在否定句、疑问句中.而此处为肯定句句式，根据上下文语境，应用不定代词many(接可数名词)或some(接可数或不可数名词).

(2) Because→Because of

Because为连词，其后应跟从句，而此处其后跟的是动名词短语(so much viewing)，因而应改为短语介词Because of.

(3) 去掉be

情态动词may的否定式，为may not，后接不带to的不定式动词(与助动词一样)，后接动词原形，而构成谓语动词.

(4) read→reading

因为句中read位于介词of之后，介词之后的宾语应是名词或动名词.

(5) program→programs

program为可数名词，此处the radio programs应为复数名词，因为由语境young people listen to 判断肯定为多种广播节目.

(6) noise→noisy

前者为名词，后者为形容词.与be连用为系表结构，形成复合谓语.复合谓语，主要说明主语的特征、类属、状态、身份等.如: She seems quite optimistic about it.她似乎对这件事很乐观.

(7) On→In

介词on表时间，特指某一天.某时间.如：

I usually go to the cinema on Sunday.

我通常在星期天去看电影.

而介词in表示一般时间或表年、月、季节.如：

In one year I can write about twenty letters to my mother.

在一年里我能给母亲写大约二十封信.

(8) 无错.

(9) 去掉第二个to

句中make children to want things...中to为多余，因为动词make为使役性动词，主动态make接复合宾语时，应为make somebody do something.而不是make somebody to do something.类似用法，除使役动词let，have外，还有感觉动词，如feel, see hear, watch, notice等.如：

Let me do it for you.让我来替你做.

what made you think like that? 是什么使你这样想?

但注意使役动词，感官动词改为被动结构时，其后的不定式仍需加to如：

He was seen to enter the theatre.

有人看见他进了剧院.

(10) real→really

real是形容词，really是副词，really在句中they don't really need.修饰动词need.