假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改. 增加

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Three years ago, I became a student in anordinary school．Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom,I find the teachers patient and considerate． However, Ienjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class． I decided tomake the best for it． I worked hardly and got alongwell with teachers and classmates． Whenever I haddifficulties, they were always available． Soon, Ibecame one of the top student in my class, what greatly increased my confidenceand I got more motivated．

My experience tells me that it is not whatyou are given but that how you use it that determine who you are．

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 disappointing—disappointed

 find—found

 However—Besides或Also

 for—of

 hardly—hard

 teachers 前加my或the

 student—students

 what—which

 去掉but后的that

 determine—determines

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