假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改. 增加

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

  2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分。

Dear editor,

   I’m a student come from a remote and poor village. Let me shareyou a touching story about my teacher, Ren Ying, which is in a wheelchair. Shecaught a serious disease and lose her ability to move in 1986, but she failedthe college entrance examinations because of the handicap. After attemptsuicide twice, she began self-study. Later, she run a school for children inthe village. He has been a teacher and a headmaster for 12 years. Now ourschool has 6 grade and 200 students.

                                                  Yours,

                                                  LiHua

试题答案

【答案】

第一句：come改成coming

第二句：share后加with；which改成who

第三句：lose改成lost；but改成and

第四句：attemp改成attemping第五句：run改成ran

第六句：He改成She；去掉第二个a第七句：garde改成grades

【解析】 略