假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改. 增加:在缺

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Mr. Johnson,

I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting inyour company. I am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. Myname is zhang Hua. I was born in the Hebei Province  and I am in goodhealth. I’ve just graduated in the Computer Departmentof Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am special good atcomputer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doingsome writing in English as well. Beside, I know a little French. And in my sparetime ,I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famousand I’ll very glad if you let me work for it. Mytelephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to hearingfrom you soon.

试题答案

【答案】

Dear Mr. Johnson,

I’ve learned from a newspaperthat some clerks are wanting in your company.

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I am eager to being one ofthem. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua.

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I was born in t\he Hebei Provinceand I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in

from

the Computer Department of WuhanUniversity. I did very good in all subjects and

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I am special good atcomputer studies and English.I                            especially

can read science books in Englishand doing some writing in English as well. Beside,

do                                 Besides

I know a little French. And in myspare time ,I enjoy playing basketball. As is said

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that your company is very famousand I’ll  very glad if you let me work for it.

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My telephone number is027-89276628. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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