When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also

When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleasing when I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.

试题答案

【小题1】friend 加S.

【小题2】it 改为one

【小题3】that改为which

【小题4】my father后加for

【小题5】He 改为I 

【小题6】after the school去掉the.

【小题7】pleasing 改pleased

【小题8】after改gave

【小题9】gives改gave

【小题10】much删掉。

解析【小题1】friend 加S.         考查名词。句意：当我上高中时，许多的朋友有自行车。Most of 后面加名词的复数形式。

【小题2】it 改为one          考查代词。句意：我希望能有一辆。One 指同一类中的不同个。It代指同一内容。

【小题3】that改为which      考查定语从句。句意：有一天我看到一辆二手自行车，它只卖100元。Which代指a second-hand bicycle，这是非限制性定语从句，故不用that.

【小题4】my father后加for     考查介词。 句意：我要求父亲给我买。Ask sb for sth，向某人索要某物。

【小题5】He 改为I            考查人称代词。句意：我必须得负担另外一半的钱。提到是我而不是父亲。

【小题6】after the school去掉the. 考查固定短语。After school放学后。

【小题7】pleasing 改pleased      考查形容词。句意：我的父亲很高兴当我一个月后给他钱时。修饰人用pleased。

【小题8】after改为later.          考查固定搭配。A month later,一个月后。

【小题9】gives改gave           考查时态。整体文章用一般过去时来讲述，用改成一般过去时。

【小题10】much删掉。         考查感叹句。句意：你能想象当我自己骑车去学校时有多么快乐吗.how +形容词+主语+谓语，感叹句的构成。

考点：短文改错。