(2009.湖南卷)写作 假设你是某中学新老师李红.请给你的朋友张华写一封信.告诉他你第一天上课的情况.主要内容如下: 1. 描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事情,

（2009.湖南卷）写作（满分25分）

假设你是某中学新老师李红，请给你的朋友张华写一封信，告诉他你第一天上课的情况，主要内容如下：

1. 描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事情；

2. 介绍你处理该事的方式；

3. 谈谈你的感想。

注意：

1. 词数不少于120个；

2. 可适当发挥想象，增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 文中不得出现与本人及学校相关的任何真实信息。

试题答案

【答案】

Dear Zhang Hua,

It’s three months since I heard from youlast time. Now I want to tell you an impressive story happened on my firstlesson.

On hearing the bell, students ran into theclassroom as quickly as they can. But a boy, Li Ming, whose father died a monthago, was late for the class. He stood outside the classroom, silently. I smiledto him and let him came in. After a while, he cried on his desk. Then I walkedto him and asked what had happened .He told me that his mother was ill and hehad to take some medicine for her. At the same time, he apologized to me forhis lateness. Moved by his words, I praised him for his deeds and decided tosing a song named “Mother” for the students. How time flies! Class was overbefore I realized it.

From the story I felt we should respect ourparents and do our best to help them. Do you think so? I’m looking forward toyour reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hong

【解析】本文属于半开放性提纲式书信体，要点有三，选材学生熟悉，也是发生在他们身边的故事，学生只要把握准情景和要求，使表达的内容不走题即可。