短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Jack,

I'm middle school student．I'm writing to tell you my problem with my mother．She is a doctor, whom works very hard．She is strict in me, but she is too busy with her work that she found little time to talk to me．I love her and I do well in my studies, but I still feel a little of afraid of her because she loses her temper easy．I don't know how to communicate with her．Maybe that's why we have seldom sat down and exchanged our feeling and thoughts．I hope we can know more about each other and understand each other well．I do hope we'll be closer．What can I do?

Looking forward to your reply．

Best wishes!

Your sincerely,

Tom

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