假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改. 增加:

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My name is Bruce Hall. I'm happy to being your Englishteacher. First, I'd like to tell you

something about myself. I was born in Paris which thewinter is cold. So I went to a warm place—Egypt and lead camels for touristsunder the pyramids. Before some time，I went tostudy at California State University，with themoney I had earned it in Egypt. Late，I went toSalt Lake City and became high school teacher. It is five years since I came toChina as a teacher of English. My classes are designed special to meet the needsof each student whether they want to prepare for various exam or generallylearn to speak English. So if you have any difficulties in learning English，please don't hesitate to come to me.

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 being改成be

 which改成where

 lead改成led

 Before改成After

 去掉it

 Late改成 Later

 became后面加a

 special改成specially

 exam改成exams

 difficulties改成 difficulty

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