短文改错 Dear sir, I want much to work in your hotel. My names is Li Hua．I'm twenty-

Dear sir,

I want much to work in your hotel.

My names is Li Hua．I'm twenty-two years old．

I have graduated(毕业)from a middle school four    (1)_______

years ago. I'm doing as an ordinary worker in  (2)_______

a chemical plant. I have keeping on teaching   (3)_______

myself English in spare time these years. Now  (4)_______

I can say English very fluently and well. I once   (5)_______

act as a part-time English teacher after work in a (6)_______

factory-run middle school. I'm surd I can fit  (7)_______

for the job in your hotel. I will be my great1 (8)_______

pleasure if I can be accepted．I'll do my best (9)_______

to serve for the foreign guests.   (10)_______

(1) 去掉have动词时态错误.有特定的表示过去时间的状语four years ago，所要用一般过去时态.

(2) doing →working动词错误.“做某职业的工作”要用work as.

(3) have与keeping之间加been动词时态错误.have been doing 是现在完成进行时，表示从过去某时开始一直到目前还在进行着的动作.

(4) in 与spare之间加my习语错误.in one's spare time意为“在某人的业余时间”，是习惯表达.

(5) say→speak动词错误.“讲某种语言”用speak.

(6) act→acted动词错误.“曾经担任过”要用一般过去式.

(7) can 与fit之间加be动词漏用错误.“适合某工作”用be fit for,其中fit是形容词.

(8) I→It代词错误.it指代I can be accepted一事.

(9) 正确

(10) 去掉for介词错误.serve是及物动词.不能受思维定式影响，以为含“为……”之意就要用for….