短文改错 Dear Ralph, I'm a newcomer here of a small town. I would (1) describe mysel

Dear Ralph,

I'm a newcomer here of a small town. I would

(1) ________

describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my class-

(2) ________

mates, it seems always difficult for me to do things

(3) ________

well as them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see

(4) ________

me as a fool. So I feel unhappy every day.

(5) ________

Besides, I have few friends. I don't know that they

(6) ________

don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked

(7) ________

to each other very well in class, but after class 

(8) ________

once. I am trying to improve the situation since it

(9) ________

doesn't seem to work. Can you tell me about

(10) ________

what I should do?

Yours,

(1) of改为from 意思是“来自一个小城镇”，用from.

(2) quietly改为quiet 作宾补，与shy并列，用形容词。

(3) well前加as as well as是固定词组，意为“和……一样”。

(4) to改为at laugh at是固定词组，意为“嘲笑某人”。

(5) √

(6) that改为why 根据上下文的意思，应表原因。

(7) talked改为talk 时态错误，应是一般现在时。

(8) stranger改为strangers 与主语一致，应是复数。

(9) since改为but 根据上下文的意思，此处应表“转折”。

(10)去掉about 接宾语从句，不用about.