短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文. 文中共有10处语言错误.每句最多两处错误.错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误。每句最多两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改正后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last week, I visited Beijing．I always look forward to visit there．Therefore, I was so excitedly that I couldn't fall asleep on the night before I started．I got up early and pack for the journey．In my pack, I put camera, some clothes, a mobile phone and so on．It spent me 8 hours to go there by train．I visited some place of interest．They are very beautiful．I enjoyed myself．I felt tired and excited because I learned a lot of about the history of the city．As long as I arrived home, I phoned my boyfriend and told her about my journey．

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